govorni nastop- ANGLEŠČINA NUJNO!!!

[sončnica00]

Lepo bi vas prosila z pomoč!

Imam sina, ki ima v sredo govorni nastop iz angleščine. Naredila sva ga skupaj, a nisem čisto prepričana če je OK. Naj povem, da mu dela ANG velike težave in bi res prosila za pomoč.

Takole sva pripravila govorni nastop (going to in Will future).
MY NEXT HOLIDAYS

ON MY SUMMER HOLIDAYS I AM GOING TO AMERICA WITH MY PARENTS. WE ARE GOING TO SPEND THERE A WEEK. FIRST WE ARE GOING TO FLY TO NEW YORK BY PLANE. WE ARE GOING TO VISIT THE MOST IMPORTANT PLACES IN THE CITY AND WE ARE GOING TO THE STATUE OF LIBERTY BY SHIP. AFTER THAT WE ARE GOING TO RENT A CAR AND DRIVE TO WASHINGTON. THERE WE ARE GOING TO VISIT WHITE HOUSE AND WASHINGTON MONUMENT. WE ARE ALSO GOING TO DO SOME SHOPPING FOR SOUVENIRS. I HOPE I WILL SEE THE PRESIDENT OF UNITED STATES OF AMERICA AND I HOPE WE WILL HAVE THE BEST HOLIDAYS EVER.

lp

[admin]

Pozdravljena,
Žal mi je, da ti nihče ni odgovoril, očitno smo tik pred koncem vsi zelo izmučeni. Upam, da je nastop uspel. Vsekakor mu želim uspešne in dooolge počitnice
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